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China x Reader: Best Day Ever

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"Kyaaaaaaaa!!!!!! stop it yao!!!! that tickles!!!!!" You screamed as your best friend kept tickling you. "No way aru!!!! not until you admit I won!!!!" He refused to stop until you were pulled away by your "father". "Come on little ___ we must go shopping you need some new clothes da?"  he said pulling you onto his shoulders. "Da daddy Russia! I need some new clothes..... but can I play with china a little more?" you said almost crying you really didn't want to leave him. "No my little sun flower I thought daddy told you, you couldn't play with him anymore!" you sighed and looked back at china crying and held out your hand. You were reaching out trying to grab his hand. "Bye bye yao I loves you!!" you said as you were being carried away by russia.

Thirteen years later  you were both grown up you still didn't get to see him. Until today you were going to the meeting with russia. You wanted more then anything to hug yao again. You and your father walked in and the first thing you heard was some really loud laughing or was it choking? You couldn't tell really. "HAHAHAHA DUDES THIS SHIZ WILL BE TOTTALY AWESOME YO!!!!" "OH SHUT UP YOU WANKER!!!!!" you see two people choking each other and you instantly try to break it up. You didn't speak much so you just hit the one in glasses and smiled just like your father witch made the other one back up. You looked over at your father picking a boy up. "become one with mother russia da?" he said you looked at the boy you knew that boy from anywhere. "AIYAAAAAA LET ME GO YOU CREEP!!!!!"   you walked up to your father and tapped his shoulder. He looked at you and you shook your head "no" and he put him down. "Alright my little sun flower only for you! But at least make him become one with you da?" you  giggled and smiled at him "Da daddy I will" china looked at you a little frightened considering he had just baiscly  been air raped by your father. You sat down next to him.

"Don't worry yao! Its me ____ remember?" he seemed to relax when he noticed it was you. "Ah ___ I haven't seen you in such a long time!" he looked at you and his face turn a deep red. "W-w-wow you have grown ____" he said putting his sleeve to his nose good thing his shirt was red. After spending the whole day with each other it was time for you to go home. Sadly just as you started to walk off he grabbed your arm. " _____ Wait! I have something for you!!" before you could reply he smashed his lips against yours lovingly just to say it was the best day of your life.
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Now, I understand that you said this was quickly put together but sweets..It's not that good..Now I am not saying it sucks because it doesn't. Now..I don;t even like china and this..idea intrigued me imensly..maybe grow on you plans that have been set here...maybe a series where Russia is the readers dad and the series is about being taken away and getting back to see the old friend china..anyway..I also thing that with just a bit of grammar and development this would be much better. I must admit though..how it is now..I would not read it again. It may have been written in a short time and you may like it but please..maybe a little more effort is in order before something of this..caliber is uploaded.
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